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самая обычная шансоновская сетка,и большой ноль оригинальности
01-07-2011 Panamarjov Oleg:
За интерес спасибо, а с обозначениями будьте повнимательнее, Александр. Против композиции "Непослушная мама" нет авторской галочки. Автор - Марина Ланда, это одна из первых моих проб, мой младший сын несколько раз пел её на утренниках. |
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Видимо Вы переусердствовали в занятиях по психологии "учитель"такой мрак даже в кошмарном сне не приснится,за качество миди ставлю 5,и за оригинальность ставлю 5,и за бред который Вы сочинили ставлю 5
Побольше бы таких сочинений,наш народ перестал бы слушать музыку и уделял бы больше времени работе
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01-06-2011 Zorant (Basic user)
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Еxciting music with a very peaceful middle section.  |
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| 07-05-2011 Zorant (Basic user)
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Interesting arrangement! I especially liked the clarinet melody starting at 1:40 (it reminds mi of a marching band) and piano roll at 2:04. Only deficiency I noted is too quiet sounding (too low main volume) of your last two songs (which is probably due to your equipment). Greetings.  07-05-2011 Panamarjov Oleg:
Many thanks, Zoran!  Too low main volume of last two songs(accepted) is due to my laziness to listen it the last time before laying out it on(I promise to be corrected   ). |
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| 02-05-2011 BIR (Master)
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Приятная зарисовочка, Олег  |
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| 29-04-2011 Zorant (Basic user)
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Очень спокойная прогулка There is a wrong guitar note (accompaniment) at 1:29 which is slightly disturbing. 29-04-2011 Panamarjov Oleg:
Thanks, Zoran! Sorry, I've examined the whole step up&down, criss&cross but have found nothing. If you mean big second C+D,then they are quite supposed together in a sept-harmony of a chord in one step or a share.
P.S* Or we haven't understood each other 
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29-04-2011 Zorant:
Track 6, tact 40, you have 3 notes gis2 and they create major not minor harmony. Insted of gis2 you need fis2 for first two notes and g2 for the third (at list I think so . ) |
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29-04-2011 Panamarjov Oleg:
Right you are Zoran, thanks! Some steps of track 6 I corrected after transposing, that's why, perhaps...(roof on one side)
Once more, THANNN-K-SSS! |
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30-04-2011 Zorant:
You are  (but better don't ) |
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5!! Toll! Oleg!   |
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| 24-04-2011 Zorant (Basic user)
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The original is unknown to me but this sounds interesting and enjoyable. I think (I've tried) that without drums is even better.
06-05-2011 Panamarjov Oleg:
Thanks, Zoran!  Perhaps, you're right. It's a kind of russian chastooshkas. |
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| 24-04-2011 Zorant (Basic user)
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Variations, too melodic for a classical organ (thankfully). I like it just because of the pretty melodies.
06-05-2011 Panamarjov Oleg:
Thanks, Zoran! Originally it was a song about an old musician. I also liked it.There are very few my opuses which still are pleasant to me. |
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Но снята отлично! Молодец! По ритму и питчу поспорил бы, но это и впрямь мелочи. Песня - говно, из пяти нот вся... Много!
"Смок он зэ вота - две", по сути. Это вещь!
15-04-2011 Panamarjov Oleg:
Спасибо, Ник! До пёплов мне... до пенсии гораздо ближе, но тем не менее - MANY-MANY THANNN-K-SSS! 
P.S* Шо до питча, так согласен,(ориг. - F#m) друган попросил минусовку, к его вокалу лямин - самый сенокос, вот так без транспонира и выложил. Ещё раз спасибо! |
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